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Hyper Girl vs. Captain Purity

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"Hahaha!  At last!"  Captain Purity observed the brown haired beauty in the green leotard and thigh-high boots.  The Superheroine known as Hyper Girl boldly strutted down Dream Haven's Byrne Boulevard on this clear, breezy afternoon.  A gentle gust lifted her red cape and highlighted her long, luxurious flowing brown locks.  As she obliviously approached him, Captain Purity clutched his attache case for comfort.  Hyper Girl reportedly had an array of amazing super powers:  flight, strength, invulnerability, and energy projection.  Captain Purity would have a difficult time subduing the meta-human in a fair fight, but he had a secret weapon up his sleeve.

Mere days earlier, he had made a special purchase using the funds donated to his organization, the Authority on Superhero Society (or A.S.S.).  A.S.S.'s goal was to keep the streets of Dream Haven pure and good, and fundraising focused on reaching out to those who were willing to donate funds to achieve this noble end.  A disguised Captain Purity had traveled to a secluded back alley to use all the donations to pay a ne'er-do-well a handsome sum for the means to subdue Hyper Girl so she could be brought into compliance with A.S.S.'s dress code for superheroines.  "I will protect goodness by any means necessary!"

As Hyper Girl stepped within range, Captain Purity boldly came forward.  "Halt in the name of the A.S.S.!  Just who are you trying to seduce in that outfit, Hyper Girl?"

Hyper Girl reared her face back in surprise as if she smelled something quite unpleasant.  "Uggh!  Definitely not you!"  Captain Purity pulled a glowing red rock from his attache case and Hyper Girl gulped in fear as she recognized the power robbing "Dark Stone!"

"Time to make a proper superheroine out of you, Hyper Girl!"

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What happens next?  Will some handsome and heroic white knight arrive just in time to save the lovely damsel?  Perhaps a fearless fellow heroine can rescue her?  Or will Captain Purity succeed in forcing Hyper Girl into the frumpiest superheroine costume extant?  Tune in next time, to the same Hyper Time and same Hyper Channel!

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So :iconlordamon12: is having a contest involving his OC Hyper Girl.  Here is his journal to explain:

Hyper Girl Art/Fiction ContestI'm happy to announce a contest!! :) (Smile) 
This contest is all about my OC heroine Hyper Girl
Contest Rules:
Entries can be either SHORT STORIES or ART (or both!).Stories or images must portray Hyper Girl doing Super Heroine stuff (like saving the day or fighting a super villain) OR Hyper Girl in peril (like being captured or under mind-control).You must not kill Hyper Girl in your story or art. Anything else is fair game as long as it also complies with D.A.'s content guidelines. Only 1 entry per participant for now, since this is my first time doing a contest.I'll pick the top three entries I like the best. 
The Prizes:
First Place: 
I'll commission an artwork of any OC that you would like.
Here are some of the artists you can choose from (you are also free to suggest others if you like):

So I thought I would enter, only this isn't the kind of story I usually write.  So I figured I would stop it here and hopefully someone else can pick up where I left off.  Are you a White Knight-type who cannot stand to see a damsel in distress?  Always wanted to save her but were afraid your efforts would be neither wanted or appreciated?  Here's your chance!

Or you have an OC heroine who cannot stand to see someone like Captain Purity succeed?  Here's your chance to stop him!

Maybe you are an evil villain?  Well, the second rat gets the cheese!  Swoop in and steal the damsel!  Not that I support villains, because I don't.  But I figure you villains will be villains regardless of what I say.

Finally, if none of those options sound good to you (no need to raise your hand), write an end to the story where Hyper Girl saves herself!  I mean, that's what I would do, but I have a lot on my plate right now.

Oh, and the point of this is to write a story and submit it to LordAmon12 's contest.  There are prizes!  No writing "I swoop in and save her!" In the comments.  That is just lazy and will be ignored.

Note:  you can still do a Hyper Girl story that has nothing to do with my submission.  I am just doing this to help the contest along.  You can ignore this stuff if you wish when you write or render your own submission.

Hyper Girl is :iconlordamon12: He also okayed this idea of letting someone else finish this story as a contest entry if they wish.

Art commissioned from :icontrekkiegal: who always manages to amaze me with her ability to create a great render with my sparse descriptions.  Thanks again, Candice!

Captain Purity is my OC and this takes place in :icondream-havenda:
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I Have Created a Superheroine who can knock some sense into him,not that you would mind!